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Wonderland Legends Bloodshots Torment CH17

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(Note: I copyright this story over a year ago and though it is fill with plot holes and confusing situations. Yes, it also has grammar issues and that some things may not make sense but I am still just practicing at this point. The story is a ruff, spar of the moment story and is very raw. But, I hope you enjoy it, and I look forward to hearing feedback including helpful feedback.)

Chapter 17: Dracula

As Bloodshot hit ground with load thud and then quickly pick herself up. Her gaze land instantly on a coffin at the other end of this cave she’d landed in, she walked other to the coffin and slowly opens ready for anything. Though, the coffin is empty and then hears footsteps in the darkness away from the candle lights. Bloodshot turns looking for the source of the sound.

“Blood….” Out stumble Aldo weakly.

Bloodshot’s eyes widen in surprise as she saw the weakened form of her oldest friend. She rushed over to him in her human form and when she got close enough to hold him. She felt a blade pierce her shoulder. The young woman then leaps back to see Aldo had the blade. “Aldo, Why?” Tear pool in her eyes.

“Come now, Blood. Don’t you thick Aldo’s body suits me?”  Dracula’s voice came from Aldo’s mouth.

Bloodshot stood stunned. “You… You took Aldo’s body…” She said in shock as her eyes widened again and then her face morphed into one of rage. “HOW DARE YOU TAKE HIS BODY!!!” she screeched in anger. “That’s it! Dracula, this ends here!” Bloodshot lunged at the vampire king with her claws out.

Dracula laughs at this as he dodges her attack only turn and punch to the gut. The female coughs as she flies into pillar, banging her head against it. She lay there motionless for a bit, when she suddenly sat up. The vampire king laughed again. “Oh, you should have just stayed down.” he chuckled.

Bloodshot stood up then turned to the chuckling vampire, her eyes glowing bright red and a cruel smile plaster on her face. She then laughs insanely as she gave Dracula a psychotic looks of both joy and rage. “Tik tok. Tik tok. Time just stopped. Time just dead for you.” she laughed the last three words in an animalistic primal growl. At that moment rock began to float up into the air all around Bloodshot, even the candles started to fly around light things on fire.

“So, you learned to use your element. It won't save you.” Dracula hissed as he lunged for the kitsune.

Bloodshot used the small floating rock as shields against the vampire's blade as she dodged the strike that made it through. While this happen her fox ears and tail appeared even though, she is in her human form. But, something odd happened to her tail; it slip into four tails.

The vampire king was shocked by this and leaped back to get a better look at the now four tailed kitsune ryu. “So, you're that strong.” He not as a question, but, as a statement.

Bloodshot then grinned again and rushed Dracula jamming a clawed hand gut then kicking him away. The vampire king growled in pain as the kitsune woman lunched some candles his way. The vampire just barely dodged them and slash out with his sword catching the female by the right leg; leaving a deep gash. But, that didn't stop Bloodshot, she just laughed and laughed. She then kicked the vampire with the same leg and smashed in the nose with punch to the face. Dracula hissed lunged at the human-fox in rage hitting her with both the back and front of his blade, but still the she-fox laughed. She just wouldn't stay down.

Bloodshot then kicked the vampire king in the gut before sling shooting rocks, which he dodge with eases.

At that moment, Dracula use his telekinesis to toss the she-fox around. Each time she hit a wall a large splat of blood was left. He continued this till he knew Bloodshot was dead, then tossed her aside. “You stupid beast.” he hissed as he began to walk away.

After that the vampire king felt a claws tear out his heart and be for dying saw the one who did it: Bloodshot. Her cold eyes stare down at him with both happiness and sorrow. “Good night, Aldo.”
Wonderland Legends Bloodshots Torment CH16 / Wonderland Legends Bloodshots Torment CH18

I copyright this story over a year ago and though it is fill with plot holes and confusing situations. Yes, it also has grammar issues and that some things may not make sense but I am still just practicing at this point. The story is a ruff, spar of the moment story and is very raw. But, I hope you enjoy it, and I look forward to hearing feedback including helpful feedback.

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